My name is a Von and I'm a year 8 student from St. Pius X Catholic School. Wow! you seem to have a great time with your family during the weekends. I enjoyed reading your writing! I was wondering does your horse have a name?
Hi Crystal, I really like this post because you hooked me in from the picture of you with a horse. This reminds me of a book I was reading about a horse. Maybe next time you could write a little more writing. Overall you did a good job.
Hi Crystal,
ReplyDeleteMy name is a Von and I'm a year 8 student from St. Pius X Catholic School. Wow! you seem to have a great time with your family during the weekends. I enjoyed reading your writing! I was wondering does your horse have a name?
Keep up the great writing Crystal!
yes he has a name it is Mac thank-you for your feedback Von
DeleteHi Crystal, I really like this post because you hooked me in from the picture of you with a horse. This reminds me of a book I was reading about a horse. Maybe next time you could write a little more writing. Overall you did a good job.
ReplyDeleteThank-you for your feedback Genica
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